[mawi427]

Originally Posted by GT500

I must agree with werty. Great progress, but that red is making me a bit dizzy if you know what I mean? Quite a magnificent piece, all of the rest criticism can be found in your other topic, I see your haven't fixed anything, but since you had already shaded, it had defeated my hopes of seeing the back rim fixed. But dont' worry about it! Hang this up on your wall! It deserves it! It's a wonderful picture with much potential. When you start your next drawing, look at this one, analyze your mistakes, and start fixing your errors. Bravo!
May I ask what type of pencils you are using?

heh...ordinary mechanical pencils