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First rally chop!
This is my first rally chop and I wnat some tips on what I have done wrong and how it can be better
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Not bad, wish I could even come close to that
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looks like the car is floating ! .. next time try to di it with hi-res picture ... that way it will be a lot easyer
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Very good, the only thing that needs improvement is the windshield and the spoiler. The windshield looks weird w/ that green and the spoiler is far too big/ugly. Oh yeah, the car looks like its flying (use dust/gravel effects plus shadows to make it look like its on the ground) Other than that, its good.
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Quote:
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it doesnt look rite i would imagie that the original background pic was of the car sliding round the corner?
it would of looked better if you would f made it more like that you need shad ow and lots of other things on there really ![]()
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TAKE THE WING OFF THAT POOR THING NOW!!!
Yep, it does look like it's floating. It would help if the background was on o different anglr, not almost level with the road. Don't blur the car as much, or even at all, blur the background and wheels only, as if the camera is moving with the car and not stationary. |
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oh, and another thing, as Rockefella touched on, shadows, to make the car look like it isn't floating cas a shadow onto the road underneath the car, that way you can guage how far away it is fron the gravel.
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