Supercar Design (Critique

[6speed]

Originally Posted by 90ft

If you've been working on this design for a year or so then you should be MUCH further along with it.
Your drawings are very basic - early scetch phase.
After a year I would expect full rendered images of high quality not some scratching on toilet paper. THe idea of a scetch is to communicate your idea with the people you are working with. Therefore it is importent that body sections and transitions are clear and easily read in the scetches.

Please don't take this as just me hammering your scetches I'm trying to be constructive.
your scetches both front and rear lack information.
If you were to give these to a modeller they would simply laugh at you.
Door shuts are very usefull for showing body sections.
Highlights down the wheel arches and acoss the body sides are important.
Leave in construction lines if you like. Depends on your style.
I don't know how old you are . . . but I would expect this grade of drawing from someone around 15 years old.

There are a million examples of scetches available on the internet as well as tutorials and rending classes.
This isn't aimed at you as an individual rather at everyone who posts images of their scetches on this site.
Why don't you start by copying and trying to get a grasp of the basic proportions of vehicles. Then learn rendering techniques before trying somethiing from scratch.
It may look simlar to something done before to start with. But as you improve you will be able to draw cars without using underlays - in the same way that artists do life class as a way of learning to learn humans. Then you can use your style and imagination to create images and designs that can be truely appreciated by people.
You will also learn the difference between illustration and design drawings.

Give him a break.

[Dr. Phil]

What do think of the sides specifically. I am working on a new version I might post tonight or tomarrow. slightly more original...

[6speed]

To be honest, the side is what makes me cringe the most. It's to Testarossa-like to me. I just don't expect it. lol. And I can't see it in real life. Try putting some carbon fibre in there, and maybe it'll work.

[Dr. Phil]

I didnt like the testarossa sides either. these will grow on u. they did on me