Here is my design

[CdocZ]

ok, i finally finished. this is NOT the final form of the actual car. esperante is doing me a huge favor by refining the actual artwork, cause i suck at that part. well, esperante, have fun! (anyone else if they want to help too)
http://img115.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img1...picture003.jpg
http://img115.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img1...picture004.jpg
also, tell me what you think worked/didnt work in the design. disregard the bad art, pelase

[Blue Supra]

im not sure i like the way it looks like the back end lifts up, the body should run parralel to the ground not tapering up to the back and no spoiler, on that scale the "wing" would be 2 feet high no rice thanks

[CdocZ]

yeah, thats why i got rid of it (they are in the wrong order, the 2 pics) i want it to have a spoiler......but i cant draw for crap.

[Esperante]

I'll try and adapt it

[SPHFerrari]

ummm... how old are you? i dont really like that design but ok

[CdocZ]

15 and 9 months tomarow (permit day!!) yeah.....i can view pretty much exactly what i want to draw.......but actually drawing it is a disaster.....i can see like 10 things right away that i would like to fix but cant really draw

[dashers]

surely this should be in the upc supercar bit not the miscellaneous bit?

[Esperante]

not if he doesn't want it to be the UCP supercar.

[dashers]

hmm,cunning stuff

[CdocZ]

bot sure if i want to put it in for ucp supercar. really depends. also, ONLY if a muscle car engine is put in. i made that have a viper-type front for a reason. also, alot of people will probably say its too agresive (the indredible angle going down from the rear wheels to the front) then again......if drawn correctly, it will look much better and smoother, while retaining its agresiveness

[kko]

It just looks like a bunch of parts from other cars were put in a blender, UGLY! You exagerated the "agressiveness " too much tho.


(better ?)

[CdocZ]

oh..thanks.....but thats not what its supposed to be, it actually, like ive said about.......3 times now, didnt come out the way i wanted.

[Coventrysucks]

I can't really tell what is happening at the front of the car - the side profile doesn't really correspond to the top view.

[CdocZ]

like i said........this will be the fifth (5) time ive said this in the past week. I CANT DRAW! at all! i will right now name 5 major things i messed up on now that im looking at it with a more critical eye.
1) the very noticeable difference in heights above the ground near each wheel. i wanted it to have an agrresive look, kind of like the murcielago, but i overly exagerated it waaaaaaay too much.
2) top does not correspond to the angle i just mentioned, so it looks rather retarded.
3) angle of the front is wrong, its supposed to be a bit more like the viper, in terms of the angle there (but not completly)
4) the body does not fit the passenger area AT ALL
5) due to my terrible drawing skill, the hood scoops (not the vents, the scoops) look retarded, because i cant really draw in a way that will allow it to look like its supposed to
i will now continue, with more then 5 things that i can spot wrong with how i wanted it to come out
6) the scoops on the side are a bit too big for the car
7) headlights, due once again like everything else to my being a really bad artist, look nothing at all like how i wanted
8) wow, a design problem FINALLY. what to do with the back of the passenger area?
9) how the bottom of the front suddenly becomes parrallel to the ground, biiiig mistake
10) the top view......which completly sucked, is actually nothing like how i wanted it to be like. hardly at all.
11) as you may have noticed, the second picture (the first link actually) does not have a spoiler, while the first picture (second link) does. yeah.....it kinda needs a spoiler, but like ive now said like 40 times, i cant draw!!!!!!!

[SPHFerrari]

dont get cocky, we are just trying not so be mean and say you suck at designing and drawing (yes i know youve said this)

the angle going down from the rear to front wheel was blatantly intentional, something like that cannot be a drawing error, it was even done with a ruler, it is just a design flaw.

also, you labelled the wheels as 21 in rear and 16 front, this is very stupid cuz it would look like crap

had you received our constructive criticism politely, not a single person would have made fun of you drawing ability. we know you cant draw, and were trying to help you improve your design. if you just keep blaming things on your drawing ability and make no effort to fix it, then you have no excuse.

where did the forth time you said you cant draw happen? u said it was three and then in the next post 5. so calm down and dont get so defensive and try and be a smart ass.