First time post - second and third render i've done

[Pedro69]

OK! Hi everybody! First time post in Ultimatecarpage.com!

Well, i had some sketches in my computer for some time! Years to be exact! They were black and white and very tiny!
With the practice i've been getting from the few chops i've done i decide to render them!

Here is the result...

http://xs121.xs.to/xs121/07446/XP330.jpg

Not 100% satisfied with the result, i tried another perspective!
This was my first attempt to sketch a car in a view that not frontal, lateral or rear!

I know that the left side of the front is pretty strange! I experienced several options and this is perhaps the one that looked better.
Maybe it's important to say that i don't pay to much attention to the perspective and that notices a lot!
If someone as suggestions...

http://xs221.xs.to/xs221/07450/XP330_3-4_final.jpg

Oh! And if someone want to comment my render, please, don’t be shy!

[cmcpokey]

looks good, the quality of the render is good. the design is a bit flat though. very reminiscent of the blah 90s car designs.

[IBrake4Rainbows]

It's either under-wheeled, or excessively long.

other than that, good effort :)

[Cotterik]

looks like a mix between a camaro and an AMV8. Needs a little added character but yeah good effort =)