New Drawing!

[70cuda88]

another drawing i just did like 5 minutes ago, took about 2 hours

taking comments...

by the way this is a Gemballa Mirage GT

[my porsche]

one thing that might help is try to make smoother pencil strokes. I used to chop like you are, but if you just slow it down and go smoothly it looks nice, also build up the shading a little more.

Pretty good basic shape though

[70cuda88]

not to deny your help, but most of those lines are complete, there are just 2 or 3 of them, im not a big eraser because when i do, it normally screws something up. but i still need to work on that

[johnnynumfiv]

Getting better with the perspective, but you still need to work on that a bit. And with the pencil lines, try using a wider pencil or just do one stroke instead of several. Are you going to try to shade the car at all?

[70cuda88]

as a matta fact... i just made a color copy(copied it and colored it.) i wanted to keep the really simple original so its open for other stuff (e.g. shading, coloring, sharpening, embossing ect.)

here it is

this is just a simple color, i didnt take a whole lot of time if you cant tell

[Sledgehammer]

, also build up the shading a little more.

That pretty much sums up my comment as well.

[Luxurioux]

Not bad at all. It would look more nicer if you spent more time doing the tonal shading, and um.. i'd reccomend you to use longer strokes, when doing the first sketch.

[Luxurioux]

another drawing i just did like 5 minutes ago, took about 2 hours

I think that would take about 30 to 50 minutes to do.. well, more effort, the better .