Alright this is my latest chop, i think it turned out alright, please let me know what you think.
Alright this is my latest chop, i think it turned out alright, please let me know what you think.
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its ok, nothing too special in my opinion. The front is much too low in comparison to the rest of the body, and where u've put it wide.......somthings not quite right. But its still quite good, the front fits well.
Last edited by 85RX7; 10-08-2004 at 10:59 PM.
just a little rough around the edges and the CF is too light but everything else is great.
That's nice Fabio, good work!
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i think, the front is on a bit to much of an angle to the rest of the body, a lil bit blury in places, but i like the designs
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Interesting detail behind front door, the air duct. The fascia looks a little off, like the low front spoiler hit a curb. Overall nice.
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the front bit is too low IMO, it's good... not ur best though, but its better than what i can do... lol
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i think if you hadnt made that intake in the side, i would like it
its a very good front though.
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i like it, very good, looks realistic
da only i see wrong is da edges, they r a bit messy
other than tht. crazy chop.
I really like this one, from a design and from a chopping view. Sure, it's a little messy, but a few more minutes working on it could fix that. I really like this chop, you might just want to consider working out the flaws
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If you could point out the flaws for me I would be very happy to fix them.Originally Posted by Esperante
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"The most beautiful Ferrari is the Ferrari we have yet to build"--Enzo Ferrari
"Ferrari is the best and will always continue to be the best"--Fabio Dal Colletto
"Ferrari is scaled down version of God" --Jeremy Clarkson
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Alright
1-The side vent just looks scribbly. Probably because the mesh on the right side it is perfect with no shading, shade it a bit to make it look sunken into the vent.
2-There's a bit of a discolouration between the bumper and the car
3-the intercooler, I don't know if you put that in or not, whether it's real or implanted, is on an angle with the two vents above it.
4-The airbrushing connecting the bumper to the bonnet is rough
5-the two little vents above the intercooler are off, the center should be aligned with the center of the BMW vents (though not completely, as to maintain perspective) and the ends of those vents should line up with the edge running down besides the BMW vents
6-and probably the easiest thing to do-reroute the rear doors 'line' where it opens so that it is coherent to the shape of the line of the sidevent, as to maintain the wide body shape and keep it from looking 'flimsy' if you will.
Good luck, I am looking forward to a final version of this
Last edited by Esperante; 10-09-2004 at 01:16 PM.
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niiiiice! good to see a bit of the good old EVO in there try getting rid of the number plate.. great chop!
I think the plate looks good on there.
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