beginner chopper

[AstonMartinV12]

this is my 3rd or 4th chop and i am looking for constructive critisicm (sp?) gimme ur ideas

[85RX7]

constructive critisicm...........

ok,
-the wheels need brakes in behind them
-Some sloppy lassooing on the rear bumper, it looks quite jagged wher you have changed the colour
-The lense flares are the sign of a noob, so dont use them, thay make you look like an ameture
-The light covers, door handel and exhaust tip......im not gonna go there!
-the stickerd dont really look like stickers, thay just look like text...if u know wot i mean........

[illusionest]

constructive critisicm...........

ok,
-the wheels need brakes in behind them
-Some sloppy lassooing on the rear bumper, it looks quite jagged wher you have changed the colour
-The lense flares are the sign of a noob, so dont use them, thay make you look like an ameture
-The light covers, door handel and exhaust tip......im not gonna go there!
-the stickerd dont really look like stickers, thay just look like text...if u know wot i mean........

u r WAAAAYYY too picky with chops dude

here we go...err... sry if im a tiny bit 'mean'...
-really messy lassoing...
-the whole car overall looks pretty...ugly...
-colors are kinda weird....

other minor stuff (stuff that 85RX7 points out in every chop lol )
can slowly be fixed... keep chopping

edit: avoid posting every single chop at ucp

http://www.ps-garage.com/forum ?

[85RX7]

u r WAAAAYYY too picky with chops dude

here we go...err... sry if im a tiny bit 'mean'...
-really messy lassoing...
-the whole car overall looks pretty...ugly...
-colors are kinda weird....

other minor stuff (stuff that 85RX7 points out in every chop lol )
can slowly be fixed... keep chopping

edit: avoid posting every single chop at ucp

http://www.ps-garage.com/forum ?

Well, if i didnt say it you would have

I'm not trying to be mean here, i'm just giving advice on improving. That is after all what he wanted.

[painterr]

LOL!! Guys!! I remember your first chops!!!! lol! Not to bad for just getting started! For the lens flars you might want to try and making them colored like light blue ect... I use to have a tut on making lens flars colored like tail lights flares red. If anyone wants me to post it, let me know and I will try and find it!!

[in10sive]

It' not too bad for a beginner.
Agree with all of the above comments especially the lense flare,leave it alone it always looks bad.
As for the wheels use parts from real cars that way you get the brakes and all.

[Manik]

Definatly not bad at all for a beginner, gosh you should have seen some of my first chops.

The only thing that I don't really like about the car is the yellow on it.