Auto ads ive made.

[scottie300z]

Ok, now im in school to get my degree in advertising. All of these ads were done during my first semester of my first advertising class so i was very green when i made them. (still am for that matter) so please dont be to harsh w/ comments, but still feel free to say what you think.

These are the bmw ones.

[scottie300z]

I cant seem to find them all, but here is what i have. And that glare on one of the ads above is from my scanner i think. Not sure, it has been about a year.

Nissan ads.

[R34GTR]

The spelling in the 2nd nissan ad is crap :P

I like the beemer ones they look very proffesional

[scottie300z]

Ok thanks for the comments. I spent more time on the bmw ones, There are plenty of flaws, but i wasnt really putting that much effort in them to be flawless since its just a class and i was getting graded more on the concept.

And actually the nissan ones never got turned it. But yeah, the spelling is awful.

[tmnt_ppn]

in the bmw, 3rd pics, the size of that 6 bmws isn't the same. the lower-right pic is slightly smaller, u can see it from the gap in the middle of the lower pic. and also in the left, between the upper and middle one, there's a gap there. it may not too important, but it is better if all 6 is symetrical, imo.

the others is all fine.

[johnnynumfiv]

Don't distort the pics as much, and use more of a creative font, and they'll look mint. Good job.

[The_Canuck]

lol nissans new saying "nuff said". nice ads the evolve one is cool

[Manik]

lol, I know what your job's going to be.......

[deffenbaugh03]

Those are really good I like the bimmer ones. Like johnnynumfiv said, you definitely need to use better fonts, and don't distort the pictures.

[Sweeney921]

Everything looks pretty good, except the picture in the M6 ad is of a M5

[GT F1]

Everything looks pretty good, except the picture in the M6 ad is of a M5

haha, I just noticed that.

[Prius]

try using the font I used in this Five Hundred ad I created. it's Ariel, in bold. (information) headline is Ariel Black.

[GT F1]

Headline is sort-of cheesy.

[Blue Supra]

mitsubishis onto a winner here.

[Esperante]

try using the font I used in this Five Hundred ad I created. it's Ariel, in bold. (information) headline is Ariel Black.

The Ford Five Hundred isn't a luxury car. You couldn't ever possibly compare it to something $60,000. You should also capitalize the word 'Honest' and put a period after it. If a car company can't get grammar right, what makes you think they can build a car?

Oh, and it's 'Arial,' not 'Ariel;' fonts aren't mermaids.